For those who read my story

[Stan H]

I made my story available online to gather reactions to it. I am not trying to open a discussion about the feisability of the plot, nor am I attempting to gather praise. I am simply looking for honest reactions to enable me to improve the story. Though the book has been published, I want to expand it, improve it, and re-publish it.

Please go back and give me your honest opinion. I can take it.

I appreciate it.

 http://vietnamvetsandfriends.yuku.com/topic/5634/Review-critique-re...

[Dave McGowan]

I read some of Stan's story and it's a good one. I hope to get time to get back to it and read more. I hope the comments I sent him didn't upset him too much.

I like one of Louis L'Amour's comments from years ago. He said that writers should read everything they can from as many authors as they can find. In particular, read the type of work you would like to write by authors you appreciate.

Therefore I need to read Stan's work.

[Stan H]

Dave

 

Not upset al all. In fact, I appreciate the comments,, gave me soething to think about.

 

Pat

I am not sure of your comments. I understand about Vietnam, but my story is not about that.